Free Query Critiques

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Edit your query letter to appeal to agents.
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Send you my award winning query that landed me an agent.
A blurb from me once your book gets published.
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Send all materials and questions to me at: pb442@cornell.edu.

FAQ

What experience do you have?

I'm an agented author represented by Stacey Kondla. I've queried three manuscripts and won awards on each, including the "First5Pages Workshop" for my most recent query template and first pages. So, yeah, I've been into this querying gig a while.

How do I know this will help me get an agent?

My expertise is in submission and book doctoring, not only editing. Like any other marketer worth his sale, I'll tell you that you need more than a quality product to stand out. I'll tell you exactly what tweaks and hacks you need to use to stand out in all the right ways to land your agent You'll get an honest appraisal of your query, with line by line edits and a phone call. When you get your agent, then I'll offer blurbs and more support, since I saw your work early and hopefully you took my advice. Unlike other critique services, I'm not trying to make a buck here. I just want to network with up and coming writers, AKA, you.

Why do you do all this?

I do a free critique service to meet new and aspiring authors, to network and solidify my presence in the writing community. You get a cheap query critique and I get more people interested in my stuff. Win, win.

How long does it take?

About 3 days. I often finish sooner.

Where do I sign up?

Here.